4.9 - LOCKUP

posted February 25th, 2011, 10:22 am

"Oh my god, you look FABULOUS"

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4.9 - LOCKUP

4.9 - LOCKUP

February 25th, 2011, 10:22 am

This took me FOREVER to draw and finish, I'm sorry.

Anyway, I'm messing around with some line highlights to help define the light source a bit better. Also, I'm having some fun with Keyes's expressions. Considering he has no eyebrows I had to improvise.

Furthermore, I love drawing the female form. So much more graceful than men. It seems to "make sense" more.

4.9 - LOCKUP

February 25th, 2011, 10:22 am

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February 25th, 2011, 11:55 am

Oaf7724 (Guest)

Lookin great. Not sure what's goin on in the last panel?

February 25th, 2011, 1:08 pm

Annnnnie (Guest)

I don't think you need to change how you define your light source. You are really good at it. I can understand the adjustment if the scene is looking through glass with a tint. The light might be accented. I am also confused abou the action in the last pannel. Is she angry? The emotions on Keys are great : )

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February 26th, 2011, 6:26 am


I think I agree with Annie; you've also lit your panels well and typically show the source at some point. In this one, I think you accented the lighting to exaggerate the light from the field generator? At least, that's how it works for me.

She's angry and wants to get Alda outta there for treatment...?

I actually really like Steele's facial expressions in this one, going from stolid to open-mouthed talking, to a big smile talking, and then angry.

Bravo, sir!

February 26th, 2011, 12:28 pm

HenMan113 (Guest)

I think she's upset the Pig Man is wearing her uniform, and she has every right to be. The pig man is OBVIOUSLY better suited to spring colors

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February 26th, 2011, 12:57 pm



+100000000 points

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